Cupid’s Arrows at 350 Meters/second
by Rachel Creager Ireland
They twinkled about him, tiny droplets of a cool spring rain; they washed over him, crushing the air from his lungs, a deep ocean wave– a towering rogue wave –portending disaster. They drove straight to his heart, each a sublime gift from Cupid, shot at 350 meters per second. He adored the golden locks cascading down her shoulders; her smile was a lighthouse on a stormy cliff; but what transfixed him, what obsessed him, what drove him insensate to dive to her feet and profess his desire to die caressing her delicate ankles with his lips, was that sound, those notes, the notes from the piano.
Thanks to Julia’s Place for the prompt. See the blog to read other interpretations of the theme, and why not join in the fun?
A very creative and colorful use of words. I like it.
Like the build to the final line
Thank you both!
Beautyful
Love that challenge of Julia’s It really gets one thinking.
It’s a great exercise, and a nice length. Long enough to say something, short enough to require one to choose words carefully.